Nice use of photography and the doll is quite interesting as it shows symbolism and links to your music video. Great use of conventions. Perhaps, you could include a price above the barcode? or the albums name at the back? Lastly, you could also make "eye of the needle" stand out and also list it first as it makes sense to be your 1st choice. Overall, great back cover!
I really like the photography that you have used, it links to your music video as the doll was a symbolic object in the video, I like the layout of your back cover, its very simple and effective. Overall, its really good!
Try make the barcode a little bit smaller. The photography is excellent and has a lot of symbolic and indexical meanings (comms). You should play around with brightness as in my opinion the image is a tad bit to bright around the image. Also you may need to work on the contrast. Finishing off, the text 'reserved' should be in light with the 'copyright symbol' and 'stamusic.net'.
Nice use of photography and the doll is quite interesting as it shows symbolism and links to your music video. Great use of conventions. Perhaps, you could include a price above the barcode? or the albums name at the back? Lastly, you could also make "eye of the needle" stand out and also list it first as it makes sense to be your 1st choice. Overall, great back cover!
ReplyDeleteI really like the photography that you have used, it links to your music video as the doll was a symbolic object in the video, I like the layout of your back cover, its very simple and effective. Overall, its really good!
ReplyDeleteTry make the barcode a little bit smaller. The photography is excellent and has a lot of symbolic and indexical meanings (comms). You should play around with brightness as in my opinion the image is a tad bit to bright around the image. Also you may need to work on the contrast. Finishing off, the text 'reserved' should be in light with the 'copyright symbol' and 'stamusic.net'.
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